Growing up in a Mandarin speaking family, my ability to converse
in English has been weak since young. Having low self-confidence on my ability to
communicate well in English and being fearful of ridiculing myself in public, I
dreaded talking to people in English and was afraid to speak in public. My confidence
of speaking English leaped after my experience of being a teacher during my
teaching internship after my A Level Examination. Although I am still unable to
communicate very well in perfect English, with more confidence of speaking
up and communicating in English, I know I will have more opportunities to
improve through my daily conversation.
My grammar has been one of my weakest area in English Language.
I was told that I am careless when it comes to grammar since I was young. It was only after
reflection that I realised that most of the errors I made is not due to carelessness
but my confusion with grammar usage. I only got my misconception cleared when I
was in Secondary 3.
A common feedback from my previous English tutor is that I
need improvement in my sentence structure and writing style. The only solution
I could think of to improve is to read model essays to learn and adopt their
writing style. However, no matter how hard I try, I find it a challenge to do
so.
Hi Keyun, I find your post very interesting and I feel that I have broadened my mind in terms of general knowledge. I feel that your paragraphs transition smoothly and are concise.
ReplyDeleteTwo suggestions:
I think "Growing up with a Mandarin speaking, my ability to converse in English is weak since young" could be
"Growing up Mandarin-speaking, my ability to converse in english has been weak since young".
and
"My grammar has been one of my weakest area in English Language. I was told that I am careless when I come to grammar since young. It was only after reflection I realised that most of the errors I made is not due to carelessness but my confusion with grammar usage. I only got my misconception cleared when I was in Secondary 3." could be
My grammar has been one of my weakest areas in the English language. I was told that I am careless when it comes to grammar since I was young. It was only after reflection that I realized that most of the errors I made were not due to carelessness but my confusion with grammar usage. I only got my misconceptions cleared when I was in secondary 3."
Sorry if I made any mistakes. Let's help each other out in this module so that we can improve together!
Thank you for the comments and suggestion! :)
DeleteHi Keyun! I enjoyed reading your post and knowing more about your English Language Learning Journey. There are good organisation of your paragraphs and they are easy to understand.
ReplyDeleteHowever, I think "Although" and "But" shouldn't be used in the same sentence as which I see in this sentence, "Although I am still unable to communicate very well in perfect English, but with more confidence of speaking up and communicating in English, I know I will have more opportunities to improve through my daily conversation."
I think you can replace the "but" with "however" or replacing "Although" with "In spite of the fact that" so to avoid the grammar mistake.
Sorry if I made any mistakes! Let's work hard together to improve our English! :)
Hey Li Ting! Thanks so much for your comments!
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ReplyDeleteThanks for your effort with this detailed reflection, Ke Yun. I appreciate your willingness to share. As we have already explained, there are a few language items here worth your consideration. Li Tiang and Esther have noted some of these. I'd be happy to discuss any questions you have.
ReplyDeleteI look forward to reading more of your writing.